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Sometimes keep thinking
If she is thinking about me as much as I think of her

Never, not for a minute forget you can
I keep thinking about how good you are staying with
I feel in paradise
Does it feel that way too?

I want you to be mine
No one makes me feel so
so special

Every minute I feel more and more passionate
Even with so little time together I feel connected to you
We are almost inseparable
Love is in the air.
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shep4life Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Lovely!
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ohmygoskjackfrost Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
mmmmmmmmmmmmmm
I feel ya in almost all ur poems about Love.
If u want, u can read some of my newest poems in my gallery.
I think u'd like them.
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eniguima Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I'll take a look at his poems, seems to be a really good idea.
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ohmygoskjackfrost Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
k
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saevuswinds Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014  Student Writer
The second line of the second stanza feels a bit off for me, but overall, a very cute poem. 
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catbat0001 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014
glowing with beauty :)
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